Tuesday, August 21, 2012

Roots and Recipes Draft

As I talked to my mom about leche flan, a memory went through my mind. Suddenly, I was walking through the front door of my childhood home. Picture this: the cool, night air surrounding us, and a bright light, enabling us to see our Christmas tree, beautifully decorated with silver and blue trinkets, which were my parent's favorite colors. My brother and I were playing and laughing until our stomaches ached, and my older cousins locked themselves in a room because they didn't want us to peek at our Christmas gifts. It was the perfect scene for Christmas Eve.

I remember bugging my mom, dad, grandmother, uncle, and cousins about what they were doing. I was very spoiled, impatient, and pig-headed. Although once I stepped into the kitchen, I couldn't help but smile. It smelled amazing. My grandmother was placing the honey glazed ham into the oven, my uncle putting rich, creamy butter onto slices of garlic bread, My dad stirring the pot of boiling spaghetti sauce, and my mom was mixing condensed milk and egg, which was to be used for leche flan. That was when I decided to help my mom. I watched as she melted sugar in a pot. It took a lot of patience, but my mom didn't seem to mind. I asked her why she didn't mind making such a time consuming dessert. "It brings back memories of my childhood," she told me.

I was playing a game with my cousins and brother, until I heard, "DINNER'S READY!" I ran down, and the smell of sweet and slightly spiced ham, garlic, and spaghetti sauce wafted up my nose. The light was a lot dimmer, though. Only one light was on, although you could still see that not a foot of the house was covered in Christmas decorations. It was the type of scene that I'd go back to at anytime of the year. That night was absolutely perfect.

When dinner arrived, a smile lit up on everyone's faces, followed by an exasperated shout of, "Finally!" And then, we dug in. We talked, we laughed, and of course we all ate, but there was something out in the air. That was probably the closest my family was in a very long time. Although when dessert arrived, everyone was even more excited. We had a chocolate cake, beautifully decorated with my grandmother's frosting, buko pandan, which is a mixture of coconut meat, pandan flavored jello, tapioca pearls, condensed milk, and cream; which act as fillers. We had a few more desserts come in, and finally, the leche flan came in. It was in it's usual oval shaped pan, which was then turned over a plate, revealing the melted sugar over it. It looked gorgeous.

I placed some onto my plate, and took a bite of it. the milky, creamy, taste ran over my mouth, followed by the caramel-like taste of the sugar. "Mom, how did you learn how to make this?" I asked. "When I was a kid, I watched my uncle make leche flan, and I wanted to make this for my future family and friends, so I asked him to teach me," she replied. And then I realized that I'd finished my slice. I immediately took a second.

Although before I could finish, my family's clock struck 12 o'clock, and I was surrounded by a chorus of "Merry Christmas!" I laughed and joined in.



2 comments:

  1. Good job on sensory details, the memory, and how you felt about it. But I don't understand the ending.

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  2. Nicely Done! One thing I would suggest trying to shorten your memory story just because the topic of focus becomes confusing. You talk about christmas and christmas dinner and that seems to be the focus until you talk about leche flan. Also there isnt much personal attachment to the story except how delicious it is and how you feel when you eat. Remember, we want more than just its taste.

    Last thing watch for tense shifts make sure all the verbs indicate the same time. "My brother and I were playing and laughing until our stomaches ached, and my older cousins locked themselves in a room because they didn't want us to peek at our Christmas gifts" playing-locked (two different tenses).

    So read over and try to give more personal attachment to the dish.

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