Brave, kind, wise
Controlled by curiosity.
I gain courage even in the toughest situations,
and take lead in times of crisis.
Although when I'm threatened,
a whole new side of me takes over.
A darker, more aggressive side.
I become self-involved, impulsive,
independent after the disappointments I've dealt with.
Acting without care,
speaking without thought.
Running headfirst into my problems.
I am a ram.
Good one ram. You just need to fix your ending not just i am a ram.
ReplyDeleteI AM A MAJESTIC RAM.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Ranyl; "I am a ram" is such a generic ending. Come on, crazy Hannah, you can think of an alternative ending. I really like the structure of your poem, it seems so Hannah-esque. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI liked the poem and how it was laid out. It ended off strong.
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