1. I enjoyed Roots and recipes..it's somewhat rooted in out hearts. Reading it brought me back to my childhood, It had the same effect with my daughter and probably with the following generations to come. Plus... it made me really hungry.
2. I think that your portfolio is perfect, I see the importance of family and customs in your writings. I feel optimism your heart.
3. I liked your organization because of the way you identify what is important.
4. I think you should continue developing on your word choice. It grows as you mature as a writer.
